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<span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">肆酒疏狂——七绝《墨海》题照 [平水韵] </span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">山横镇尺固云笺，</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">玉树擎来逸少椽。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">四顾新题寻未果，</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">一池碧墨是谁研？ </span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">版主曰：可盡情搬磚。</span><img src="http://www.52shici.com/images/biaoqing/13.gif" style="border: 0px; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">1，最後一個字，研</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">字 声调 拼音 注释</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">研 先韵 平声 yán 音妍。《说文》䃺也。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">研 霰韵 去声 yàn 或作砚。《郭璞·江赋》绿苔鬖髿乎研上。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">幾乎可以判定，不妥。或作硯。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">2，可以看出，題圖詩也，相信力不能不說鴻鵠萬里。然，觀其主旨，在於題，而不是墨海，結句，自問不能自解也。原因在於，轉句不妥，轉句說題字或題詩，結句卻問一池碧墨是谁研？ </span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">3，作品中運用典故，本是好詩，惜哉，主旨沒交代清楚，遺憾。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">清 叶燮說過：学诗者，不可忽略古人，亦不可附会古人。此處，用典純熟，造景多姿，總覺得不是作者自己的景，自己的理。</span><p></p>
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