八卦掌付 发表于 2015-12-12 09:06

喝火令辨析

<span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">晓月危峰挂，晨炊野渚浮。酒家云旆对清流。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">闲钓一钩飞狄，为觅白蘋洲。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">欲省千年事，先疏百尺楼。子陵滩外可横舟。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">剩了清风，剩了梦通幽，剩了满堤红叶，不必问春秋。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">这个词牌比较特殊，故而多说几句。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">喝火令词牌有一个规律，供参考——+</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">先看例子：</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">昨夜灯前见，</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">仄仄平平仄句</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">重题汉上襟。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">平平仄仄平韻</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">便愁云雨又难禁。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">仄平平仄仄平平韻</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">晓也星稀，</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">仄仄平平句</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">晓也月西沈。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">仄仄仄平平韻</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">晓也雁行低度，</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">仄仄仄平平仄句</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">不会寄芳音。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">仄仄仄平平韻</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">此词无他首可校。后段句法，若准前段，则第四句应作“星月雁行低度”，今叠用三“晓也”字，摊作三句，当是体例应然，填者须遵之。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">那么，请看这首下片：</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">欲省千年事，</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">仄仄平平仄句</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">先疏百尺楼。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">平平仄仄平韻</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">子陵滩外可横舟。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">仄平平仄仄平平韻</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">剩了清风，</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">仄仄平平句</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">剩了梦通幽，</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">仄仄仄平平韻</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">剩了满堤红叶，</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">仄仄仄平平仄句</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">不必问春秋。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">仄仄仄平平韻</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">就是说：陵滩外可横舟（这里有一个领字，一字领，词作中没有看到。）对&nbsp;&nbsp;清梦满堤红叶，显然，词意不好理解，这个机关在于，此处必须对仗。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;">范例中：星月雁行低度，不会寄芳音。与上片，烟水数年魂梦，无处可追寻也要对应。</span><br style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; font-size: 16px; line-height: normal;"><p></p>

独行剑客 发表于 2015-12-12 10:56

经典收藏，谢谢了！

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-12-12 10:57

独行剑客 发表于 2015-12-12 10:56
经典收藏，谢谢了！

多谢，上午好

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-12-12 10:57

独行剑客 发表于 2015-12-12 10:56
经典收藏，谢谢了！

多谢，上午好:handshake

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-12-12 10:57

独行剑客 发表于 2015-12-12 10:56
经典收藏，谢谢了！

多谢，上午好:handshake:handshake:victory:
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