金缕曲

三笑发表于 2023-12-15 09:00

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三笑发表于 2023-12-15 09:05

么念发表于 2023-12-15 11:58

@三笑才女好{:1_292:}

一剑飘香红 发表于 2023-12-15 14:50

厉害，诗人啊，暂时葱白一会

我也在 发表于 2023-12-15 17:17

笑姐好，
喜欢读笑姐的诗词，
结尾句总是这么优雅又荡气，
让人有一种必须熟读几遍。

阿轩发表于 2023-12-15 19:28

聽優雅音樂，讀極優文字，心境舒然嘍

大鹏发表于 2023-12-15 20:00

金缕曲是贺新郎的别名吧？

笑笑能够轻松填写的词牌真多。{:1_293:}{:1_293:}{:1_293:}

大鹏发表于 2023-12-15 20:03

巫娜的古琴曲《静水流深》配得真好，听了好几遍。

大鹏发表于 2023-12-15 20:22

读来这首词，很有画面感，感觉身历其境。哈哈！醉了！

往时“邀上知音三五个，品甘泉、……”

方今“邀上知音三五个，试新茶、……”

来日“邀上知音三五个，饮陈酒、……”

感觉后面平仄有出入，不管了！哈哈！;P

蓝魔发表于 2023-12-15 23:09

忆昔从游京国。记华堂、朱弦清唱，玉杯停盏。词客风流多雅趣，谁似苏辛豪放。又岂似、太白与子美，俱为知己良缘浅。今日里，怀古意，空悲溅泪沾袖。

追思往事如梦幻，想当时、金戈铁马，战旗招展。指点江山英雄气，激扬文字豪侠胆。更哪堪、山河变色国破家亡，付与流水东逝去。今日里，怀古意，空悲溅泪沾袖。

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